Freeform clarification post #1
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prisoner_exchangePlease respond only about tags you nominated. You can either reply here or edit your tag in response to the query. Queried tags that haven't been edited or discussed by the end of nominations will be rejected.
A general note: Please avoid using "they" in freeforms when multiple people are mentioned, as it's often unclear. "Captor Tells Prisoner How Much Captor Loves Prisoner" is clunky, but clearer than "Captor Tells Prisoner How Much They Love Them." Thank you!
Changes
Coercion - Captor Believes They Are Following God's Will
Moved to Scenario, as it's unclear what the coercion element is.
Noncon - Metal all the way through
Replaced with Noncon - Impaled all the way through with metal object and Noncon - Penetrated all the way through with a metal object or chain for clarity.
Queries
Noncon/Dubcon - Captor in heat/rut fucks unwilling captor - potentially forces them into heat
Should "unwilling captor" be "unwilling prisoner", or is the captor unwilling due to being in heat/rut? Also, please either remove "potentially" to lock the forced heat into the freeform, or remove the last part altogether so requesters can prompt.
Noncon - Captor touches Prisoner while making them watch the character of their desires
Whose desires? And what is being watched: is the desired character walking down the street, being assaulted, something else? Please clarify.
Scenario - Captor Kidnaps Character Who Reminds them of their love
Would "Scenario - Captor Kidnaps Character Who Reminds Captor of Captor's Love Interest" be an accurate rephrasing?
Slavery - Forced prostitution with Rescuer
It's unclear who is being forced or by whom; please clarify.
Noncon - Prisoner given choice to noncon other prisoner or the captor does
We already have Noncon - Prisoner A Forced to Rape Prisoner B or Else Prisoner B Will Be Raped by Captor, so this tag will be rejected in 24 hours.
Scenario: working together to escape (fails)
Scenario: working together to escape (succeeds)
We already have Scenario - Prisoners work together to escape, which implies success, so we have approved the first as Scenario - Prisoners work together to escape but escape plan fails and will reject the second after 24 hours.
A general note: Please avoid using "they" in freeforms when multiple people are mentioned, as it's often unclear. "Captor Tells Prisoner How Much Captor Loves Prisoner" is clunky, but clearer than "Captor Tells Prisoner How Much They Love Them." Thank you!
Changes
Coercion - Captor Believes They Are Following God's Will
Moved to Scenario, as it's unclear what the coercion element is.
Noncon - Metal all the way through
Replaced with Noncon - Impaled all the way through with metal object and Noncon - Penetrated all the way through with a metal object or chain for clarity.
Queries
Noncon/Dubcon - Captor in heat/rut fucks unwilling captor - potentially forces them into heat
Should "unwilling captor" be "unwilling prisoner", or is the captor unwilling due to being in heat/rut? Also, please either remove "potentially" to lock the forced heat into the freeform, or remove the last part altogether so requesters can prompt.
Noncon - Captor touches Prisoner while making them watch the character of their desires
Whose desires? And what is being watched: is the desired character walking down the street, being assaulted, something else? Please clarify.
Scenario - Captor Kidnaps Character Who Reminds them of their love
Would "Scenario - Captor Kidnaps Character Who Reminds Captor of Captor's Love Interest" be an accurate rephrasing?
Slavery - Forced prostitution with Rescuer
It's unclear who is being forced or by whom; please clarify.
Noncon - Prisoner given choice to noncon other prisoner or the captor does
We already have Noncon - Prisoner A Forced to Rape Prisoner B or Else Prisoner B Will Be Raped by Captor, so this tag will be rejected in 24 hours.
Scenario: working together to escape (fails)
Scenario: working together to escape (succeeds)
We already have Scenario - Prisoners work together to escape, which implies success, so we have approved the first as Scenario - Prisoners work together to escape but escape plan fails and will reject the second after 24 hours.
